Hello! Thanks for logging in, to take a look at this presentation. One note we would like to communicate is referencing the spacing in the lettering.

The spacing of the letters are meant to continue along the intentional elegant theme Ryan has been going for. His suggestion is to mind the text with the surrounding elements in terms of a separation in order to keep the easy flow and breathability within the over all layout. We feel as though letters being spaced too closely together begins move into the realm of typical, non elegant imagery and advertising.

We of course are more than happy to make any edits you request while continuing with out desire to communicate our professional suggestions.

We hope you are as excited about how this has come together, as we are 🙂